ГДЗ по английскому языку 11 класс Афанасьева Spotlight Базовый уровень страница - 94

### Итоговый ответ --- ### Exercise 6 #### 1. Key words in the rubric: * **warden**, **local park**, **make more attractive and popular**, **write a report**, **suggestions**, **appearance**, **facilities**, **improved**. #### 2. Rewritten Report: **To:** Mike Stephens, Shipton Park Warden **From:** Alex Reed **Subject:** Suggestions for improving Shipton Park **Date:** 14th November **Introduction** The purpose of this report is to put forward several recommendations on how the appearance and facilities of Shipton Park could be improved in order to make it more attractive and popular. **Appearance** Firstly, the park is in urgent need of more greenery, such as colourful flowerbeds, shrubs and trees. In this way, the overall environment would look significantly more pleasant. Furthermore, additional gardeners should be employed by the council to maintain the grounds properly. It is also recommended that more rubbish bins be installed around the park and that the existing litter be collected regularly to keep the area clean. **Facilities** Regarding the facilities, there is currently no playground for children. Therefore, a modern and safe play area ought to be constructed. In addition, a cafeteria could be opened to provide refreshments for visitors. Lastly, a small all-weather football pitch should be built to encourage sports activities among teenagers and families. **Conclusion** To sum up, it is believed that if these recommendations are implemented, the park will be improved immensely and will attract far more local residents of all ages. --- ### Exercise 7 #### Rubric A * **Key words:** warden of the flats, university, make safer and more pleasant, report, recommendations, 200–250 words. * **To / From:** To: The Warden of the University Flats / From: [Student’s Name], Resident. * **Purpose:** To suggest recommendations on making university flats safer and more pleasant to live in. * **Style:** Formal, impersonal, objective. * **Possible Headings:** *Introduction*, *Safety & Security Improvements*, *Living Conditions / Communal Areas*, *Conclusion*. * **Beginning:** *"The purpose/aim of this report is to suggest practical ways to improve..."* * **Ending:** *"In conclusion, I believe that implementing these changes will make the flats..."* #### Rubric B * **Key words:** evening class, local community centre, director, make more popular with young people, report, suggestions, 200–250 words. * **To / From:** To: The Director of the Community Centre / From: [Student’s Name], Evening Class Student. * **Purpose:** To provide suggestions on attracting more young people to the local community centre. * **Style:** Formal, polite, constructive. * **Possible Headings:** *Introduction*, *Activities & Courses*, *Facilities & Modern Technology*, *Advertising & Promotion*, *Conclusion*. * **Beginning:** *"The purpose of this report is to propose ideas on how to make the centre more appealing to young people..."* * **Ending:** *"To sum up, by introducing new activities and upgrading the facilities, the centre could attract..."* --- ### Exercise 8 #### 8a. Suggestions for Rubric A (Improving a block of flats): * *Given ideas (1–5):* Redecorate interior, renovate exterior, install security doors/alarms, make communal areas welcoming, employ night security guards. * *Two additional ideas:* 6. **Install energy-efficient LED lighting and CCTV cameras in hallways and car parks.** 7. **Upgrade and repair kitchen and laundry appliances.** * *Selected favourite ideas:* 1, 3, 4, 6. #### 8b. Brainstorming for Rubric B: 1. Introduce modern courses (e.g. coding, graphic design, photography, street dance). 2. Install high-speed Wi-Fi, modern computer stations, and gaming zones. 3. Open a youth-friendly café serving healthy snacks and coffee. 4. Promote centre events via social media (Instagram, TikTok). --- #### Sample Report (Rubric A — 200–250 words) **To:** Mr J. Davis, University Flats Warden **From:** Anna Petrova, Student Representative **Date:** 18th May **Subject:** Recommendations for Improving University Accommodation **Introduction** The aim of this report is to propose a number of improvements to make the university flats safer, more secure, and more comfortable for residents. **Safety and Security** First of all, security in the building requires attention. It is strongly recommended that modern security doors with key-card access and an intercom system be installed at the main entrance. In addition, brighter lighting and CCTV cameras should be fitted in the corridors and surrounding pathways. These measures would prevent unauthorized visitors from entering and ensure that students feel safe returning late in the evening. **Living Environment and Communal Areas** Secondly, communal areas such as the shared kitchens and living rooms should be made more welcoming. The living rooms could be redecorated and refurnished with comfortable sofas, study desks, and indoor plants. Furthermore, replacing old, noisy kitchen appliances with modern, energy-efficient models would greatly improve everyday living conditions and reduce electricity costs. **Conclusion** In conclusion, by tightening security measures and upgrading the common areas, the university flats would become a significantly safer and more pleasant environment to live and study in. I hope these recommendations will be taken into consideration. *(201 words)* --- ### Объяснение и правила выполнения 1. **Структура формального отчета (Report):** * **Шапка:** Обязательно указываются поля `To:` (кому), `From:` (от кого), `Subject:` (тема) и `Date:` (дата). * **Заголовки (Headings):** Каждый абзац должен иметь четкий тематический подзаголовок (*Introduction*, *Appearance*, *Facilities*, *Conclusion* и т. д.). * **Введение:** Содержит стандартную клише-фразу о цели отчета: *«The purpose/aim of this report is to...»*. Не используются разговорные выражения вроде *«I'd really like to tell you...»*. * **Основная часть:** Делится на логические блоки по темам (внешний вид, безопасность, удобства). Личные нерелевантные подробности (например, про сад папы) исключаются. * **Пассивный залог и сослагательное наклонение (Subjunctive/Passive):** В отчетах преобладают безличные конструкции: *«It is suggested that... should be planted»*, *«more bins should be installed»*, *«it is believed that...»*. * **Заключение:** Подводится итог и выражается надежда на реализацию предложений (*«To sum up, it is believed that...»*).